2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

As is the chart shows diferent educational level have different weekly earning .the more you degree, the more you earn.from the statistics,we can see the doctoral degree earn more weekly. howerve,less than a high school have merely earned money. this phenomeon has aroused many student's concern. as a student,you are duty in learning.for one thing ,you can have your goal ang determin what you want to .for ather,we invest more money o our study and life of campuse,we should realize our parent's burden.only we work hard can we make our parents live better. a high degree mans youcanhave comfortable and easy life meanwhile you can experience you have high knowledge and realize your boss. in my view ,education pay is important for us.