题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;请注意分段。
The relationship with computer and man is becoming more and more important. we also say we can leave with computer everyday. In work day we must use computer to deal and analasis data. Every excellent report or speech cannot forget the contribution of computer. It also gives us much convinent in our live. Now shopping on the Internet is not new words for Chinese people. At the same time we can enjoy the wonderful chat which feels like face to face with our family even if we are in different places.