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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。
Some people hold the view that a student's success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming, which is characterized by sowing the seeds,nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards' process. From my point of view, I can't agree more. It is true that a student's success depends on the firm faith, the hard working, and the continuous persistence. As a university student, sowing the seeds means the first step to study. At first, we should make a plan for our study,which can guide us to a hopeful future. Only a stick study plan can help us not fall into a wrong way. After deciding what the route we should go, we have to put it into effect for a plan means nothing without action. For another, we should study hard to fulfill our goals. In order to gain what we want, besides the firm faith, the hard working is necessary. Nurturing growth is to a peasant what the hard working is to a student. If a student is too lazy to his study,he can't handle some skills nor learn much knowledge that may be a key to success. What he get may just a bitterness of failure. There is no wander the proverb says that no pains, no gains.Moreover, continuous efforts plays a indispensable role in our study, without persistence, the previous work we did will go to waste and success will far away from us.Therefore,we must be confident with ourselves and pay our time and energy on the study. If we do what I just talk, we can finally enjoy the joy of our success. We can embrace the happiness and get what we want. Rewards only give to the people who never gives up. It just like the farmer harvest the corps in autumn, after a long toilful process. From what has been discussed, we may safely draw the conclusion that a university student's success is similar to the process of a farmers' .Therefore, we students should obey the rule and struggle for the success.
