2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

The picture show that a mother's right hand take her kid and left hand take much money to find sort of teaching in a conmunity. In recent years,it's popular that many parents find teacher out of school for their kids.And this phenomenon cause controvery in public.Some people deem children can get knowledge at school.Parents shouldn't find other teacher for kids.On the one hand,kids can pay attention to their study at class if they have not other teacher to rely on.On the other hand,kids should have enough time to play in this age.Play can help explore children's brain and exercise their body.Apparently,many parents support this view.they hope their kids is the top of the class.so they think their kids need more teaching to be a extraordinaire. As far as i am concerned,i don't support this phenomenon though i am not a mother.If kids can be addicted to study at class,they needn't more instruction.Then, they have enough time to do some thing they like.This also help their study.