2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shop With the development of society,more and more people enjoys its Online Shopping,especially young people . Different people holds different attitude towards the Online Shopping,it has many benifits for us,but everthing has two coins,it also has some disadvertage.we should keep mind on it . It have lots of benefit s to us ,First,it is convenient for us ,we should not go out buying something ,we can save much of time to do something else.moreover ,Moreover,we have many choice about colour ,size ,and so on. we coloud Besides,we can buy some fathion clothes .On the other hand ,it has some disadvertages ,we can't suit it .and we also don't konw,what it is made of ,and how is the qulity .there is large digerous.