2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；请注意分段。

compter and man Nowadays, the Internet has become an important role in our daily life. Computer are applied to many fields, such as our study, conmmerce, produce, entertainment and so on. On no accout can we live without computers which can provide great convinience for us derectly.However, computers not only bring us not only advantages, but also a lot of disadvantages. On one aspect, computers make our life more convinient. First , we can comunicate with friends who are far away frome you through computers. second, computers are the best tool to complete many works.