2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowaday,a large number of people have gotten education from primary school to university.Nutrally,few man pay no attention to waht education can bring us,not only in knowlege,but earnings. accroding to the data,being for persons age 25 and over,we can reach the coluntion taht he more eduction we have got,the more money we earn.