2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowaday,a large number of people have gotten education from primary school to university.Nutrally,few man pays no attention to waht education can bring us,not only in knowledge,but earnings. accroding to the data,be for persons' age 25 and over,we can reach the coluntion that the more eduction we have got,the more money we earn.