Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,a large number of people have gotten education from primary school to university.Nutrally,few man pays no attention to what education can bring us,not only in knowledge,but earnings. Accroding to the data,be for persons' age 25 and over,we can reach the conclusion that the more eduction we have got,the more money we earn.