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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
Smile,how warm the word is! It can make anyone happy. And this happiness is from the bottom of heart. Smile is an attitude to life. In our life,there may be something unhappy. For example,you failed an exam. You are misunderstood by your classmates. Those things may make you feel sorry. What should you do? Just smile. Smile to yourself,and you will have confidence. Smile to others,and they will get closer to you. Smile is a good way. So,let’s learn to smile. Everyone needs others'smile. When we give others a smile,we will feel happy too. And maybe next time,when you need a smile,the person who received your smile will give it back to you.
