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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear kpoh, i have knew your company's products during december 14-22 in yuyu,i am very interenting.please send us a price list and instruction,.thanks coorporation with you and looking forward to establish business relationsip bewteen us.reaaly want you can keep us relationship with you some times that is so complicated and see you tomorrow can learn from you
