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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33549
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

How to be a smart consumer? As everyone knows, most of students in college are short of money, and their living expenses are about 800-1000yuan every month. If you want to live a comfortable life, you might be unable to achieve in so less money. Therefore most of college students are careful with their money. They always collect all kinds of coupons, . All of actions just for saving money. I think these methods are good ways to district our money sensitively, and also are good for being smart consumers to us. The following is my supporting. First of all, collecting so many coupons is useful when we go shopping, and then we can use them to save some money in next shopping. At the second, looking for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel and we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. As we know, group-buy is cheaper than individual shopping, and buying clothes in a sale is more economic than daily. And then we can stock a little money to do something else. we are students, and most of us don't start to making money by ourselves, the money we used from our parents, so we have no reason to use money generously. Saving money is considerate to our parents, meanwhile it is also good for being a smart consumer to everyone.

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