文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
Nowdays, many student attach little important to spelling when study English. I hold the view that it is computer that should be to blame for this question. With computer, teachers no longer write on the blackboard, which cuase students pay more attention to the concent rather than the spelling. With computer, students don't need to spell the words exactly, since the computer can correct them itself, with a result, students ignore the spelling. As far as I am concerned, only by recognizing the important of spelling can we solve this problem. Therefore, we should let students write by hands as much as possible, which may take more time and don't look such neat, but it's a long-distance fight before everyone spell properly and neatfully.