文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色。
Nowadays, many students attach little important to spelling when study English. I hold the view that it is computer that should be to blame for this question. With computer, teachers no longer write on the blackboard, which causes students pay more attention to the concent rather than the spelling. With computer, students don't need to spell the words exactly, since the computer can correct them itself, with a result, students ignore the spelling. As far as I am concerned, only by recognizing the important of spelling can we solve this problem. Therefore, we should let students write by hand as much as possible, which may take more time and don't look such neat, but it's a long-distance fight before everyone spell properly and wonderfully.