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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
My name is Li Ming.I am a boy .My birthday is June 15th 1986.I didn‘t get marryed.In July 2008, graduated from the English Department of the University of the North.In shool days ，my exam with flying colours and listen to English well，I am good at write English. I can Speaker German too.The other，I know for foreign trade processes.I like playing basketball and singing songs .Be sour ，I like watching movies.I want have a job as the foreign trade salesman
