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句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章层次较为清晰；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
It become more and more popular that poeple will choose online shopping which depends on the rapidly development techology. However,people's view towards the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping vary greatly.Some hold that online shopping is much more better,just because it can make our lifes convenient and the goods on the Internet are cheaper,while others agrue that online shopping caused many problems.Firstly,online shopping can make people lazy,the only thing they need to do is having a computer that connect the Internet.Secondly,the quality of the goods can't be sure,there are much more cheats online. As for me,I think we should shop online appropiately.Be aware of not being addicted in it.Also the government should take measures tu do with the cheats online . From the above ,every has two sides ,it depends on how to choose it.
