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from:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com attention to:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr. Johnson, we have recieved 3000 pcs production form your company on the date of 12-22, however,according to our sining of the No.35 order, the production quantity should be 3500 pcs, the rest of 500 pcs are not recieved up to now. please help to check your product list,and as soon as possible reple us. we are looking forward to your early reply! thanks for your cooperation!
