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From:wanghaiyang@hotmail. Com Attention to:sales-department@hotmail. Com Dear Mr. Johnson, we have received 3000 pcs production form your company on the day of 12-22, However,according to our signing of the No.35 order, the production quantity should be 3500 pcs, the rest of 500 pcs are not recieved up to now. Please check your product list,and as soon as possible to reply us. we are looking forward to your early reply! Thanks for your cooperation!