2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,with the development of economy,there are many commodities with excessive packaging.As we all know ,excessive packaging will be wasted many resources. What are the reason for that?Tirstly,the economy is developing faster and faster,people will be rich than before. So,they are focusing on packaging.The next,some ads always appear on screen,some people believe it.Finally,it is about the social style ,themanufacturer will produce the goods that are excessive packaging.The excessive packaging will be more and more common.The buyer have to buy excessive packaging goods. In my opinion,excessive packaging should be stoped .It not only will was resources but alsowill waste money.I suggest that people should have a corrent shopping attitude while persuiting that excessive packaging .We must know that we should focus on the quality not excessive packaging .