2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；请注意分段。

recently,more and more goods have exitented,expecially some expensive goods more worse than cheape I think that this is the reason about excessive packaging.first consumer's psychologyav they think that packaging beutiful can increase goods's quality,it looks like more expensive ,like this more have face, manfarture think pack can apply to consumer. In my opinion, on excessive packing is waste of resours and money ,such as trees will be cut,i hope consume improve