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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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要求：: 题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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文中词汇表达不够丰富，但部分学术词汇用的比较灵活；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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