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At present,a lot of parents is used to deal with promblem when their children meeting and whatever thier need help whether,but the consquence of this methods is usually make parents dispointed.As we know,parents do not help their children in the whole life,when parents become old and old children how to do,they does not any thing even cooking. Therefore ,it is important that teach children how to independent ,because teach somebody fishing is better than just give he fishes.Firstly ,parents should let children learn to do housework in daily life,as washing dishes,cleaning room and washing clothes.Secondly,make children realized parents love is not natrual,know how to apriciate.Third,there in no doubout that responsibility is everyone nessarry quility ,parents need to teach their children make them take responsibility. Deeds are better than words,parents should try them best to help children learn toabe a independent person.
