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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章层次较为清晰;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。

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Computer and Man what is computer?As is known,it represent the science , technology,and the nut of human thinking. But the rapidly developing in computer has bring a lot of disadvantages for mankind.so the debate about the advantage and disadvantage computer brings is never silent. Many successful people consider that its convenience and efficiency can be find in all corner of life.However,as a children's mother,she won't agree with this idea.when her kid has any down in aspect of study,she will think that all reasons of the down results from the computer. "Same computer ,yet different people",results in the computer always lies in the teeth of the storm, The key of this problem lies in how to reasonably use it.Although the worry for it still exist in the mouth of people,the researchers has put forward several good advice to how to use it,In the sum,computer has become essential device in our life.we need use it ti do some more meaningful things.

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