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In the recent decades . A large number of students think it is not important to learn English spelling.For example ,Writing English article appears a great amount of error ,what is more ,In examination a lot of student write faulting words that are similar with correct words. The reason why there is the promble phenomenon is that writing times cut down gradually ,Secondly,the hand of student are laziness ,Again ,Education