2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；请注意分段。

What is computer?As is known,it represents the science , technology,and the nut of human thinking. But the rapidly developing in computer bring a lot of disadvantages for mankind.so the debate about the advantage and disadvantage computer brings is never silent. Many successful people consider that its convenience and efficiency can be found in all corner of life.However,as a children's mother,she won't agree with this idea.when her kid has any down in aspect of study,she will think that all reasons of the down results from the computer. "Same computer ,yet different people",results in the computer always lies in the teeth of the storm, The key of this problem lies in how to reasonably use it.Although worry for computer still exist in the mouth of people,the researchers has put forward several good advice to how to use it,In the sum,computer has become essential device in our life.we need use it to do some more meaningful things.