2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Nowadays,many parents hely there children do every thing.Even wash clothes and so on.But I don't think it is a good idea for children.In order to make children independent,parents should do something for those children.For example,they should teach those children to stand up when children fall.When children older ,the parents should teach them wash clothes themselves,eating by themselves and so on .Many parents think that their children is too young too do anything.Because of it ,children will get into the habit of reply on their parents .Of that children can't grow .Children will be a children forever