文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
Nowadays more and more students don't have a right attention to spelling.However ,as we can see,it is important in our English learning. What account for the spelling indifferently in English learning?Among the sort of factors,I coula single out the following two.For one thing,with some machines for spelling raise which like electronic dictionary,the students are depended on it.For another,the teachers also don't pay attention to it,they don't spent more time on exercising it. As a matter of fact,this phenomenon has xexrted many negative affects on both students and education.No matter what the students learn,they should learn hou to spell when they find a new word.Noly in this way can tney don't forget the marrow of civilization.