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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分53.5分
评语:

增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

i'm not agree with this point.i think rural area and uban area both have advantages and disadvantages.For example,rural area's environment is very good,it has fresh air,green plants,clear water,you can take a walk after busy work in this quite and comfotbale environment enjoy life.but in rural area you may not as convenient as uban area buy what you want.in uban area you could have a variety of entertainment activities like gym,bar,KTV,big retaurant and so on.you can buy what you want in the supermakert or hypermakert

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