Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Recently,The people source of American had worked out a survey about education pays.According this statistics,iit's easy to draw a conclusion that more higher degree could acquire more empoly chance,such as 14.1pecent of people who had get less than high shcool diploma unemployed in 2011,and average umemployment was 7.6percent yet. Besides,high degree could earn more money than lower degree,meanwhile,average median weekly earnings in 2011 was 797dollars,in this case people who have professional degree could earn 1665 dollars. However,there have a strange situation that doctoal degree's people has more high umployment rate and earnings lower than professional degree's people.Different people have different views ,this question is worth disscussing.