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The value of certificate The modern labor market has became increasingly diverse.Many well paid positions require employee having compelx skill.students thus like taking apart in certificate examination or other tests which could provide useful skill and knowleadge in their future career.Last week, a new survey reported that the amounts partificants of college english test will have reached over 70 million.The number has aleady outnumbered a country's total undergraduate students in europe Indeed intakes always have different purpose to attend examination.some certificate can make student become morecompetitive in labor market.For example,employees who has TEM4 or TEM8 could be hired by advanced institute of translation and joint ventures.employees also could be qualified in other position which requires high language proficiency As far as I am concernd,taking apart in each kind of test could make us keep learning.Lifelong education is an inportant conception in western education system,so I really agree with attending examination