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Friends,don't be afraid to say"No"in our daily life,we should learn how to refuse others so that reduce some troubles.when someone look for help,of course,If we have ability to help them,we can do.if or not,then,you should say"No". there are some reasons that some people don't know to refuse their friends,they are likely feel shy