2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段。

Nowadays,admired by a large account of people,accepted by total society all the way,eduction play an all too necessary role in every part of society with great honor. Nutrually,we will wonder why eduction is so popular? Data,be for persons' age 25 and over,whose the earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers,shows the trend of the higher degrees educiton you have gotten,the more money you will earn.