恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;有效的运用了一些复杂句;作者词汇表达丰富度不足,也请仔细检查文章的单词拼写。
Friend,don't be afraid to say "No". Sometimes,we always don't konw how to refuse others who ask us for hlep.there are some reasons,but most important reason is that we have courage to lose our face.if we don't have ability to help them,it is necessary to refuse it.if or not,we would make them so dissappoint that lose the friend's trust. However,some people say"No"in wrong time,on the one hand,we would have done,but not to do,on the other hand,we