2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

a updated statistics about unemployment issue of year 2011 from Bureau of labor show that the umemployment rate is raleted to your degree, please see above barchart. it's illustrate that the less unemployment rate the higher degree. and the higher dree , the higner weekly earnings. i think most of people can uderstand why our present strickly request us study hard all the time after you see this statistics. although this cann't demenstrate all. in some view, knowledge can enrich our life and make people confindance and optimistic. in conclunsion , hard study is significant for your life .