小学二年级英语作文:Our house

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。

there are six people in my house.there are my parents and grandparents and my lovely brother. hehe, you will say :owe,so much people, a big family. yeah, we are lovely each other and every weekends we will go out of house to have a travel of a shopping or to see a cinema. we all feel happy of our family time every day.