小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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It is Sunday morning,my father will drive us to the lake to have a tavel. In the way we across the parking,i see there are colurful of flowers are making and many old people are walking slowly in the streed.They are making exersice. It will be better with their healthy i think. Then we have parked in the lake beside and to see the building and the water .They are so significant, i and my brother was riding with bike to have a play in this area. We have a favourable day!