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I suppose it depends on. I always colllect all kinds of coupons , look for group-buy deals and buy clothes in a sale.I can get what I really want meanwhile it is comparable cheap.Most of my friends do that just like me.All of us think it's reasonable. First of all,it help us save money.For example, a skirt is 500 yuan,but only 200 yuan in a sale.In this deal ,we can save 300 yuan to buy anything else. Secondly,the goods have good quality.this is my and also my friends experience.If the quality is not good, we will not buy it.of course,we must buy it in real shop ,not in internet.as the saying goes,what you saw is ture. Thirdly,besides above, it has shortages. The clothes are not fashion, which is old in style. the electrical equipment in group-buy deals or a sale cannot have the same assurence as the one in usual deal. Therefore, I have my opinion that it benefits for saving money.