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Rose is my favourite teacher and she teaches me mathmatics. I like her for her lovely word in the class.She can make us to understand the problem easily with her explain. And in the other hand,she is very patient to evey student.No matter the mistakes we made,she always think to teach us in her own way. Of course i like her because of she is beutiful.her smile is my favourite proud when I am good behavour. I like Rose to teach us!