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I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher. She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much. She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much. This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you? Do you have a good teacher, too?