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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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I don't think endowments are important for a happy marriage. According to Chinese tradition, a groom usually pays a certain amount of money to the bride's family to fix marriage, and this price is increasing. But many facts price that the frugal weeding ceremonies didn't have any bearing on their married life, and luxurious weddings are not insurance for a sound marriage. This is an example of me. My dad and my mom got married surprisingly simple wedding because it was economically disadvantaged families, so their endowments have only one wardrobe. This wardrobe or even own my grandfather made of wood, such endowments can be said that the simplest and most standards. Still to this day they have a happy life for over 40 years. And through my parents' unremitting efforts, our family's economic condition is getting better. In contrast, my aunt because he is my grandfather youngest child, and got special attention, she got married, bought a lot of things, and even has a TV at the time, a TV is one kind of luxury jewelry. Unfortunately, my aunt's marriage did not last long, after five years because they have some marriage problem they divorced. Of course, this can’t all be blamed on endowments, but I think it can at least prove that the marriage has nothing to do with endowments. By this fact, I admire my parents fighting spirit, also I have some opinions. So I think the economy is the basis of marriage, but the feeling will make marriage stronger. Endowments how much can't he measure marriage happiness.

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