2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Nowadays, many young people are choosing to get married soon after they graduate from college, even though they are not being financially independent. There are more and more "Flash marriages" in China today. An early marriage can have seriously problems. As the result of News survey shows more graduated brides than grooms. My cousin (the daughter of my father's sister) had such experience. She felt too much pressure to find a good job after graduation, so she chose to marry a man who loves her and is willing to help her to reduce stress. At that time, she was only 24 years old, but she still felt weird when her former classmates talked about their new single lives at party. During she was worrying about things like how to pay for the house, when to visit her parents and when to have a baby. So, she felt she was missed a period of time that should be the happiest for a girl. She had a lot of pressure on loan, and she relied on support from their parents. One year later, my cousin divorced with her husband. Finally, they ended their marriage under the stress of lives. Now, she is 30 years old, but she is still single, maybe she afraid of that marriage before. In my opinion, most of the young people who get married soon after graduated from college are from rich families, and they desire for a stable and comfortable life. However, they still have to learn a lot from society before they are ready for marriage. Young couples have no idea of what difficulties they will have in their work, their family life and society. So, the young couples should take more care to get married after they graduate from college