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There is a growing popularity of tourism in China. Meanwhile, there is a hot debate on that too many tourists may bring harm to the envirment. But some people don't agree with it. In my eyes, the appropriate number of turists will not bring harm to the environment. Firstly, an appropriate number of turists will benefit the local people who is poor and live far from the big city. The local government are capable of getting a large ammount of money from tourism industry. It is this turism input that the government can deal with many problems easily. For example, if we meet with floods, we can make best use of this tourism finance to help local people to come over it or build some puplic faciliates to conquer this emergency.
