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my views on online shopping. As we know,B2C platform is very popular now,and many people like shoping online instead of physical store because they can spent less time and money,also i am one of them. Online shopping can provide us what want without going outside.and mostly,the price is cheaper than we repect.Also we have so many choice,we have no need to worried about missing we loved.but does online completely do good to us?of course not. In my opinion,traditionally,when we want to a pair of shoes,we like to go to the shop by bus or taxi,if we live so far away from the shop,we must feel tired when we get back.But we can also compare this one to the other one,we can find the best one suits for us.but if we buy the shoes online,we can`t try on it,also ,some pics is not the same as it really is.someone hv been cheated by the online shop-owner.so i prefer to buy goods in physical store. Different people think different,my advice is when don`t care about quality but price,online shopping is the first chioce.when u want to check the goods bu youself,physical store will be better.
