2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化较为不错，另外注意文中句子错误；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真。

Recently,more and more people is willing to on online shopping instead of going out especially young people by the technigic of Internet development.For young people,online shoping is a ways that more fashion and interesting,besides,this way could help people save much energic and time so that they can use these time to do other things what they like. However,every things have two sides.Though online shopping make so much convince for us,meanwhile property is a big problem.Some people were worry about their money will be to steal,because there have found financial frenquently.In order to don't get in trouble,usually,people will choose don't online shopping . Personally speaking,if we have a alert heart,those dangerous could be escape,never be happen.