新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Dear David: I am glad to get the letter from you.You say you will go to Lanzhou to study Chinese but you don't know to study Chinese well. Sall i tell you some ways to study Chinese well. It's very important for studing Chinese to speak more. You can chat with your classmates often or talk with your teachers.I think not only your classmates ang teachers but also any other person you know will be willing to have a talking with you.The more you speak,the better you study. You can make a Chinese penfriend.It is good for you to learn Chinese to write more.You can also read some books .It's usefull for you too. I hope you can have a good time in China,I am agree that you can learn Chinese well and love China.