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Nowadays,the phenomenon of excessive packaging has been very commen in our society. There are several reasons that cause the phenomenon.Firstly,many companies think that over-packaging may attract more consumers and make them get more benefit from it,such as the mooncakes which are on excessive packaging with only few cakes inside are hundred times expensive than usual.Secondly,with the development of the economic,people now are living with a better life,which make them have a higher needs in packaging when they are planning to choose gifts to others.It will make them more pround. In my point of view,I think that ecessive packaging has caused a lot of waste in sourses and money.It also causes much pollution to our environment.We should refues the good-packaging goods. To solve this problem,I think that the gavernment should make laws to ban it and take measuers to reduce the waste.And then,as a consumer,we should take more attention on the qualities of the goods rather than how beautiful the covers are.
