2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

As the proverb goes,where there is a will.there is a way.which illustrate the imorotance of the strong will.I can say it for sure that strong will is the gurantee of success. Take ZhangHaidi for example,disabled as she is,however,she has a strong will and trys her best to make a difference.With her hard struggle,she mastered many foreign languages and changed her life.Anything is possible.what matters most is our will and effort.It is nothing new in our life that many average people who,in a poor condition,tried their best to make dreams come true.They made it,because they think they could. In a nutshell,attention should be paid to srong will.Life is what we make it.Have a strong will and we will make a difference.