Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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There are a statisticls from a net of America,that is education background, increasingly high,and the unemployment rate more and more low.From this phenomenon,we can learnt that education pays are very significant. Aim at chinese university education ,most of the people think that go to school is no useful. The reason is as follows: One things,The head of family want to their chird go to work early,in their opinon ,their chird still go to find job when they are graduation.Another things, complex social relations,they have not prililege and enough money. In my opinion,i suggest our education should more noted.