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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
My name is Li Ming.I am a boy.My birthday is June 15th 1986.I didn‘t marred.In July 2008, graduated from the English Department of the University of the North.In shool days，my exam with flying colours and listen to English well，I am good at write English. I can Speaker German too.The other，I know for foreign trade processes. I like playing basketball and singing songs.Be sour，I like watching movies. I want to have a job as the foreign trade salesman,because I like it.I suppose to my work well.
