2010年考研英语作文真题:文化火锅，既美味又营养

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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above-metioned diagram,we can observe distinctly that both the number of AIDS cases and drug addicts under 35 increased dramatically from 1985 to 2002.According to the statistics which is provided,the quantity of AIDS cases is 150 in 1985,while the volume in 2002 is 50,000.In the meanwhile,the number of drug addicts under 35 is 1,800 in 1985 and 50,000 in 2002.It is with the increasing number of drug addicts that the quantity of AIDS cases has grown over 300 times.Especially,at the beginning of the 1990's,the speed of increasing is significant reaching over 1000%. With the introduction of the above-mentioned arguments,there is no complicated phenomenon but can be explain.Undoubtedly,the drug abuse and AIDS have close relationship.From the graph we can see clearly that the higher drug addicts is,the higher AIDS case is.In another word,drug abusing plays a crucial role in spreading AIDS from one to another.